PenguinSam's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Moment In Life (FIFA 2010)]

Man your awesome!

Dude, you stuff never ceases to amaze me! You genre of music is unlike any other! Keep it up!

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ZooSafari responds:

Thanks bro! I'll keep going ;D

[Welcome To The Wild]

Oh Yeah!

Congratulations!!! I am not surprised that this song finaly reached the front audio page! Dude, keep up stuff like this! I can't say how awesome this is. Just don't die in the near future, please!

All's wild that is wild!

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ZooSafari responds:

Lol :P Okay I'll watch out over me 24/7 XD

Thank you very much for all your support Sam, you've been an amazing loyal fan ^^

I THANK YOU!

[DNA, by DJ Laro]

Oh no!

The ending needs to conect with the beginging in order for it to be a loop! It makes is sound so, cheap. And adding a bit more would be preferable.

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[Get in the HOUSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!]

Good start

I kinda like what's going on here. When you add in the melody, don't get rid of all the other sounds, make it louder or the others softer. Also, the ending didn't feel like an ending. It just kinda stopped.

Keep working on this one and some good results are sure to come!

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[In The Clouds (Draft1)]

Accents!!

In the introductory line, add accents to give it a sense of rhythm. I think that if you put accents maybe on the first, fourth, seventh, tenth, thirteenth, and fifteenth note every two measures a better feel would come up. Also, accents in later melodies might help.

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[i kissed a girl[full!!]]

Nice!!!

What can I say?

Well, I kissed a girl too, but I'm a guy!

This is awesome!!!!

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zomgkerrie responds:

hahaha...glad you liked! thanks!!! <3

[VeXy - Ghost]

NICE!!!!!!!

I can imagine this being in a DDR game, and I don't say that about most trance songs!

This song has a high level of profesionalism in it. It sounds like a ghost alright!!!!

Great job!!!

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[watch me sleep-halloween entry]

Creepy!!!!!

That freaked me out!!!! The lyrics were just...chilling, especialy how they were said. And then the beat, that was perfect. The space at the end, was, long, but that doesn't take away from the song at all. Great job!!! I hope that this does well, becauase this is amazing!!! I am freaked out by this song!!!!! Keep it up!!!

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zomgkerrie responds:

heehee thank you! i felt a little stupid recording the lyrics...i've never done anything like that...i realize now that the space you are talking about is the reverb from the gong....i screwed up and didnt fix it:< thanks for the listen and review! i don't think i will win but it will be fun to see how everyone did! <3

[voice in the well]

Effect well done!

You got the eerie-spooky effect out very nicely in this song. Good job! It was pretty empty, and I can't say that I loved it, but I like how it works.

Good job, and I hope that a Salad Fingers representative contacts you about this song...

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[halloween submission[demo]]

Here's my advice

What I would add to the melody is a sudden quick rush with a heavy beat made with some creepy sounds and so forth. I might even add maybe a chainsaw sound and screams out of nowhere to freak out the listener and portray a freaky Halloween murder among all the trick-or-treating.

This would probably require a bit of length to pull all of these off correctly, but these are things that I would consider.

Hope this helps!

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zomgkerrie responds:

ooooo. yes! chainsaws!!!and an evil voice saying "treat or treat, slut!" lol. jk on the last part. but yes, i was going to add all types of creepy effects and really make it as gritty as possible. any idea where i can get a chainsaw sample?yes, i really wanted to build up from the end of what i posted here, into a heavier, almost d/n/b feel. i was having a hell of a time with a transition so i called it a night and will work on it with a clear head tomorrow! thanks for the listen and review!!!! and your suggestions always help! thanks!