A bit misleading and repetitive
Well fist off, the drum introduction had me thinking that this was going to be a lot more of an exciting piece, not elevator style music. I was expecting something with extremely strong beats, like something you find when playing DDR.
Then there is all of the receptiveness. After hearing the melody three times I got tired of it, so I skipped to the end to see what it would be. You could have added different backgrounds or a variation of the melody or something like that.
Then there is the ending, it just kind of, well, stopped. I think that some kind of fade out or final note would make a better ending than this, preferable a final note or something of the manner.
So to conclude, a different drum intro, less repetitiveness, and an actual ending would help this song a lot. It is good, but could be better, so keep working hard and these types of things would come naturally.