Nice!
I love the ideas going on here! The melody is simply amazing and you still have that wonderful percussion going on in there!
However, there were some things that could really be done to improve this a lot.
One thing is harmonization. In classical music, introducing a melody is usually done with little or no harmonization. After hearing the piano melody the second time, I was dying to hear some harmonization, but there was none! Same goes with the flutes. Harmonizing will make a nice full sound that we love to hear.
Also, whatever kept playing the chords in the background had a really harsh front attack that I think really took away from the music at times, like the flute.
At the section that starts at 1:27, the percussion was really good, but! The snare drum should have had a constant rhythm throughout all of it, like 8 8 8r 8 8 triplet16 (3 of them) 8 8. It will help give it a sort of heroic feeling that will just create this feeling of awe!
And the flute, a duet or trio would have been a fantastic addition. More harmonization!
Other than that, it sounded absolutely amazing! This is a great first classical piece! Keep it up!
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